Saturday Short: Restroom

Restroom by Paul Levas is a flash fiction piece about a brother trying to help his younger sibling with a bladder issue. Something sinister seems to have taken an interest in Kyle's problem. As a result, a day at the carnival turns into a nightmare.

Not only is the story predictable, but there is more than one loose end. I wish the author had spent more time on the storyline details. Even though the characters are children, it is difficult to feel anything for them.

As always,
AstraDaemon