Halloween Fanatics

Halloween only comes around once a year, and the Justices do it right. They turn their house into a museum of torture, sectioning off each room with a velvet rope. The exhibits are so terrifying that the local amusement park asks them for their secret. It's quite simple, actually. And four lucky--or unlucky--fans get to find out what it is firsthand.

House of Justice by Vincent Bivona is a flash fiction piece about a family that goes overboard every Halloween. The story is somewhat predictable, but still captivating to an extent. The author has obvious potential to be a great horror writer, but I think Bivona needs to take more risks with his storytelling.

As always,
AstraDemon