A morning incident changed the lives of the siblings. A very ghostly moment with thrills arrives in Sam's family and all he knew about his only sister's peeping habit, that morning.
My Peeping Sister by Bhaskar Medhi is a difficult read because the story appears to a be poorly translated English. I also don't understand why such a short story is in need of multiple chapters. I think this could have been a compelling family drama with a paranormal aspect, if the author hired a professional editor to fix the issues. I sincerely hope Medhi will consider revising this story.
As always,
AstraDaemon
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