Thursday, September 13, 2018

Scrap The Ending

Human resources director, Lucy Matheson, is an expert at terminating staff members. But when she fires the most feared and notorious employee at Edmon Enterprises, a curse is set into motion, turning her nightmares into a reality for all eternity.

Again by Kristina Rienzi is pretty good for most of the story, until the abrupt ending. I think Rienzi should rewrite the ending to include more of Lucy's POV. I doubt Lucy realized what had really happened, and I think the author should've included Lucy finally realizing the nature of the curse, rather than just blurting it out at the very end.

Also, it would have been interesting to learn more about Tatiana and/or her Volger family history.

As always,
AstraDaemon

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