Thursday, July 9, 2020

Neglected Daughter

PATERNAL LOVE by Rebecca Sheen is a flash fiction story about a young girl with psychic abilities waking up to find herself injured and trapped. After searching her immediate surroundings, Lucy discovers a dark secret, which involves her grandmother.

Not much character development, and too rushed. Good idea for a story, but should've been longer to create more suspense.

As always,
AstraDaemon

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