Bad Decision | AstraDaemon

DEBBIE'S OLD PLACE by Sandy Lender is an odd piece of flash fiction. The narrator flashes back to someone from his past, as he and his husband drive out to the middle of nowhere to relive an old memory. Instead of enjoying themselves, they are drawn into an old house by cries of small child.

The storytelling is rough and disjointed, as if the narrator isn't quite sober. I reread this twice, but the ending is still fuzzy. Very random.

As always,
AstraDaemon