Cold and Empty | AstraDaemon

THE SECRET OF MILTON BOSKA by Samuel Fleming is a flash piece of science fiction, but most of the story is a description of the facility, with a brief dialogue between two characters. I didn't find this horrific in any way. More personal drama than anything.

I don't think a short story is the right format for this premise. Fleming should take the Boska family secret and develop it into a full-length sci-fi novel.

As always,

AstraDaemon