Desperate Measures | AstraDaemon

MY BABY by Jonathan Grisham is a short bizarro story about a woman desperate to have a baby. There's a lot of potential within these pages, from Abigail's childhood to the experimental pregnancy. Unfortunately, the author races through everything, making it impossible to feel much of anything for the main character.

This story would do better with a longer format to allow more character development.

As always,

AstraDaemon