Zombie Dust Rave LOL | Short Story Review | AstraDaemon

A MORBID DISTURBANCE by Amanda Lawrence Auverigne begins with a strange guy named Jason punching his walls, followed by a discussion with his friends about a rave. This setup is excruciatingly slow.

The writing is chaotic, and the storyline is difficult to follow. Jason doesn't know why he woke up in his apartment injured, he's lost time, and there appears to be a zombie outbreak.Halfway through the story, Jason finally remembers the events of the Zombie Dust Rave.

Zero character development, and couldn't get into the writing style at all. Struggled just to finish it.

As always,

AstraDaemon