Blackwater by Byron Black is a flash fiction nightmare centered around a young man named Jack. The story is similar in style to a Lovecraft tale, with the character's sanity slipping away in a countryside setting facing what appears to be a cult, as well as other mythos elements, but Black's idea of horror has limited interaction with the events presented within.
I think this story would be better in a longer format, with further character development and more intense action. However, Black does deliver the cosmicism.
As always,
AstraDaemon
