Monday Murder [review]

Broken Lie by Melody Jade Allen is a roughly written short story resembling a mix of Twilight Zone and Fight Club. Readers are introduced to a man named Aron, who has witnessed multiple murders. However, the local police never find any evidence of foul play. When FBI Agent Valverde takes an interest in Aron, a sinister secret is finally unraveled.

Broken Lie is more of a crime drama than a horror tale, but the suspense is pretty good. I think the author should consider turning this into a novella and getting an editor to help polish it up.

As always,
AstraDaemon