Needs More Story | AstraDaemon

PASSIVE by S.P Blake is an intriguing suspense story with a weak ending. The author hints at what could be happening, but never resolves the situation properly.

Blake should revisit this plot and write something in a longer format, such as a novella. Daniel and his affliction are a fantastic hook, and I would read more, if there had been more.

As always,

AstraDaemon