Misleading Title | AstraDaemon

THE AMERICAN HORROR STORY by Mark Rogers reads like a rough draft, and there's no way of ignoring this. Also, seems a bit ridiculous to call it "American" when the characters are using British terminology. Last but not least, the story seems to be a compilation of every 80s horror trope, with nothing original to offer.

I usually try to look past typos and bad editing, if the meat of the story is appetizing enough, but the author needs to rework this entire piece.

As always,

AstraDaemon