Nothing Lucid About It

Against The Wind by Ines Akinson takes place in France, during the year 1316. The narrator, Rainier of Lyon, talks at great length before beginning the tale itself...not the best way to delve into a short story. Rainier and his group are tasked with retrieving a well-known blacksmith to attend to the horses, which are behaving in an unusual manner.

A supernatural element is introduced, but the author's attempt at terror is lost within all the wordiness. The action scenes are disappointing, especially after being promised a story which would "take fear to another level." Too much emphasis on prose prevents any build-up of suspense.

Towards the very end, the year is referenced as 1312, creating some serious confusion. Just one of many editing issues. I can't recommend this story in its current version.

As always,
AstraDaemon