Cracked in the Head

THE STEPS IN THE WOODS by Lewis Puccini is narrated by a young man who hikes to the ruins of a castle. The setup is fairly long and the pace is quite slow. The story could just as easily began with the local legend.

While the ending is interesting, I am disappointed there wasn't more action. Too much time spent describing the woods, not enough time with the stranger.

As always,
AstraDaemon