Motivated By Memories

PICKING UP PLANS IN PALMA by Matthew W. Quinn is a science fiction short centered on a spy attempting to deliver plans in an alternative 1998 timeline. The story moves between Connor trying to escape detection and his personal flashbacks, fleshing out the current political atmosphere, which includes an insane level of apartheid.

Once the action begins, the spy's struggle to outsmart his enemies is intense, similar to a chase scene in a James Bond movie. The background connections between Connor and one of his enemies provides a very dramatic reason to keep fighting, despite being injured.

I enjoyed the premise of this story so much, I would love to read more about Connor and Katje, and their efforts to help the cause.

As always,
AstraDaemon

Poof!

LORD OF THE DOLOROUS TOWER by Matthew W. Quinn is a short story about two villagers seeking an adventure. I'm assuming the story takes place in another world, but I thought it possible Quinn created a dystopian setting thousands of years into the future.

Most of the story is told through dialogue and inner thoughts, with very little action. I did enjoy the inclusion of magic, giving a fantasy element, but the ending is abrupt. Quinn leaves readers with all kinds of questions.

I think the author should consider turning this short into a novella to add more action, as well as further character development.

As always,
AstraDaemon