Lots of Bad Guys

THE DRAIN by Victor Vilestone has been revised and re-released. In my review of the original version, I stated the author should've included a twist or two because the story was predictable. This ending is far superior, and I LOVE the changes. In fact, I think Vilestone should consider writing a follow-up short because the characters are so much more intriguing this time around.

MESSED WITH THE WRONG GUY is filled with raw emotion, leading up to one hell of a shock. Dave only wanted revenge, but he found a horrifying truth instead.

As always,
AstraDaemon

Deadly Discovery

THE DRAIN by Victor Vilestone is a dark tale about a gardener who finds something horrific while trying to unblock a drain. This is a little too predictable for me. The author could've added a twist or two to make the ending more of a shock.

I prefer the writing style of FRIENDS REUNITED by Vilestone.

As always,
AstraDaemon