Mama's Boy | AstraDaemon

THE TRAIN by Bradley Poage has a tiny bit of suspense, but this flash piece is just too predictable.

I recommend THE APARTMENT DOOR instead.

As always,

AstraDaemon

Derailed

THE TRAIN by Daniel Kendall is an unusual short story, which I wish had been longer. The author has created a disturbing supernatural mystery, and I want to know more about the "shark" and what exactly happened to the train, as well as the missing passengers.

I think Kendall did a great job making this piece a very personal experience. As I read the story, I felt the anxiety of William and the others, as if I were stuck with them.

As always,
AstraDaemon