Darkness at Dawn by Tommye Turner is a short story full of terrifying surprises. The story reminds me of a mix of Hellraiser and Jacob's Ladder. Turner is obviously no stranger to the classic elements of horror. With a little more character development and one or two flashbacks, I thin the author could turn this into a novella.
I'd love to read the story through Meg's POV, just to see how the Darkness affects others.
As always,
AstraDaemon
