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Sunday, July 19, 2020

Depressing Flash Fiction

TWENTY-FOUR AND A BOTTLE OF RYE by Adam Vine is one of the author's earlier stories, and I'm happy to say his writing has much improved.

The depressing tone doesn't bother me as much as the open ending. I feel sorry for Max's wife.

If you want to see how the author's writing style has changed, check out THIS DOOR IS LOCKED.

As always,
AstraDaemon