Burned Again | Flash Fiction Review | AstraDaemon

CRISIS CENTER by Vanessa Perry is the third story I've read by this author, and, as with the other two, most of the e-file is a preview of something else.

The suspense is pretty good, and the reveal towards the end is shocking, but I wish Perry had stayed with the storyline longer. I really wanted to know why Allie had been chosen.

As always,

AstraDaemon

Why Tho | AstraDaemon

THE GOLD HUNTERS by Vanessa Perry is poorly written. Not only that, the story is flash fiction and most of the file is an intro-promo to something else the author wrote.

This is the second time I've read something by Perry, only to discover a flash fiction disappointment, followed by an obnoxiously long promo.

I don't know how the author expects to tempt readers into reading a full-length novel when Perry doesn't put much effort into the shorter stories.

As always,

AstraDaemon

A Dangerous Wish | AstraDaemon

THE SECRET MIRROR by Vanessa Perry is a flash fiction piece followed by a preview of something else, so the story is just a fraction of the e-file. As such, the premise is good, but the storyline is rushed and somewhat predictable.

I wish the author had put more effort into the story, instead of advertising another project.

As always,

AstraDaemon