NICHOLAS' LIGHT by S.E. Casey is a flash fiction piece is full of suspense, but not much else. The narrator is walking across a frozen lake at night, knowing the water never freezes over in the center. The guiding light, thought to be a gift from his deceased twin, disappears.
The fear of falling through the ice didn't suck me in, as much as the descriptions of the bottomless pit. If you have a fear of water and/or depths which cannot be measured, this will terrify you.
As always,
AstraDaemon
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