Surprise Gone Wrong | AstraDaemon

BIRTHDAY PICS by Adam Vine is a flash fiction piece centered on a couple who are given a link to a disturbing website. They try to dismiss what they find as some sort of sick prank...until they hear a young girl sobbing in the room next door.

The suspense is pretty good, although this is not as entertaining as Vine's other short stories. The ending also left me with unanswered questions, which is a little frustrating.

If this story isn't your cup of tea, I recommend reading Vine's short story, THE LICH.

As always,

AstraDaemon