DeLuise is a Tease | Flash Fiction Review | AstraDaemon

THE VISITOR by Dan DeLuise has a great hook, plenty of suspense, and a frightening reveal, but ends too soon.

I don't understand why an author would create something so intriguing and not do more with the storyline.

I've read 7 of the 10 Five-Minute Frights, and there's no doubt DeLuise knows how to captivate readers, but flash fiction is not the format for such storytelling. Basically, this author is a booktease.

As always,

AstraDaemon