Rough Draft?

Forget about the friendly imaginary friend, this family sufferings is not an imagination, they are dealing with a mysterious deadly force that holds grudges and make its way to ruin peaceful homes.

The Unseen Friend by Saba H is a short story about children who befriend a spirit, but the thing has disguised its true nature. When the parents realize what they have in their house, their actions only make things worse.

The author has an interesting idea, but the writing is awful and in serious need of a professional editor. I can't recommend the story as it is now.

As always,
AstraDaemon