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Tuesday, May 4, 2021

The Last Apple | AstraDaemon

MOTHER by Shawn Weaver is not as entertaining as many of his other stories. This would work better as flash fiction, rather than spending half the story explaining Mel's occupational habits.

The ending is a bit predictable. A flash back providing a backstory for the woman would have helped.

As always,
AstraDaemon

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