I enjoy Vilestone's stories, but this is another one which makes think the author isn't pushing himself enough. The disgusting scene with Pete and Sally seems like a missed opportunity to introduce yet another curse. After all, he was supposed to follow the instructions exactly, and, well, he decided to get a little freaky for a few moments.
Some readers might be tempted to write off the author as predictable, but I feel this is the year Vilestone is going to catch us all off guard.
As always,
AstraDaemon
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