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Saturday, January 16, 2021

A Wedge Between Them | AstraDaemon

UNTITLED GHOST STORY by Erica Novellino is a flash fiction piece about a husband who is being investigated by the police because his wife is missing. He is also dealing with an angry spirit in his house, and he doesn't know who to ask for help.

The action scenes are great, but I would have preferred more from the characters' roles in the story. I had hoped one of the detectives would be revealed as a psychic who can see the spirit breathing down the husband's neck.

As always,
AstraDaemon

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